drive-by rec;
cupidsbow wrote a little essay four years ago, and I have just now stumbled upon it. She called it "the formula for writing sex scenes" but it can also be a "formula" for writing action scenes in general. More to the point, it’s an explanation of how many women (and many men too, these days) [...]
grr dammit
So this story involves two gay men, a couple, who pick up a butch-identified woman to play with. When I play with a new bottom and it goes well, I get all protective and possessive, I do. But not so much that i want to move said playmate into my house and relationship. She goes [...]
Editor rant; “lightly”
I just read; "She licked her lips lightly." Recently, I have read about biting lightly, sighing lightly, smiling lightly, frowning lightly. Or, as in the case of a blow-job description just now, suckling lightly. "Iight" just doesn’t strike me as an all-purpose adverb. "She licked her lips nervously" or "softly", or um… maybe she just [...]
